Bonjour, je dois crée un conte de fée ou une histoire effrayante. En utilisant le prétérit en utilisant who,whose,which

" I was in school on this day. I get up upstairs to went in my English class. But I saw a black book on the floor. The book was strange. I came in my class and I asked others :
whose book is it ?
But nobody gave me an answer. The book burned my hand. Yes, the book burned my hand. I left thé book who fell down. When I picked it up, I heard something like a voice …
The Teacher asked me:
- Minah are you o.k ?
I didn't answer him. I went to sit on my chair. I didn't understand one words which my teacher said. Beacause I thinked about the book. I didn't open it. It was scary.
On luch time I oppened it. I heard this voice again... it's was the voice of woman. she told me :
- You can believe in ...
But then her voice was not louder. But then I saw... I saw a little girl in front of me. She had her black hair on her face. And I saw blood on her hands... she sayed :
... In magic.
I was in schok. I wanted to cry. But I can't. Beacause I was scary if I close my eyes just for one second, she can killed me. But then she disappeared. Yes just like that. I looked around me, but others talked with their friends and ate.
So the voice wanted to told me : You can believe in Magic.
Then I looked at the book and there was write : Black Magic, black side, black life . Devil is inside you. Author : Kacy Parker .
My mother. My mother who died six years ago. Beacause she wrote this book. "
Voilà une histoire effrayante en Anglais . Jeme suis donné beaucoup de mal ^^