Salut tout le monde ! Faire un paragraphe écrit sur New York(villes,monuments,quartiers,attentat...) puis le dire a l'oral.>> Besoin d'aide pour corriger les fa
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Salut tout le monde !
Faire un paragraphe écrit sur New
York(villes,monuments,quartiers,attentat...) puis le dire a l'oral.>> Besoin d'aide pour corriger les fautes
d'orthographe,grammaire,conjugaison... Merci The nickname of New York City is « The Big Apple »The over name given to
the tall building are skyscrapers. New York was first called New Amsterdam.
There are 5 boroughs in New York. Their names are Queens, Manhattan,
Brooklyn, Staten Island and Bronx. France was offerd the Statue of Liberty
in 1886. Frederic Auguste Bartholdi and Gustave Eiffel were sculpted this.
The Statue of Liberty was an important symbol for immigrants in the 19th
century and early 20th century. It is on Liberty Island. The immigrants had
stop at Ellis Island before entering the United States. Wall Street is the
home of the New York Stock Exchange. The over name given to the World Trade
Center are the twin towers but they were destroyed by terrorists in
September 11th 2001. The term used to describe the site is Ground Zero. The
Hudson river separates New York City from the state of New Jersey. The
baseball is more popular. The 5th Avenue is considered one of the first
shopping streets in the world. To New York there are big monuments: the
Statue of Liberty, Empire State Building. These theatres: Shubert, Imperial
and museums: Guggenheim and the Met. There are 2 famous bridge: Verrazano
Bridge and Brooklyn Bridge. In Mahnattan there are lots of districts:
Little Italy,Chinatown,Harlem...
Faire un paragraphe écrit sur New
York(villes,monuments,quartiers,attentat...) puis le dire a l'oral.>> Besoin d'aide pour corriger les fautes
d'orthographe,grammaire,conjugaison... Merci The nickname of New York City is « The Big Apple »The over name given to
the tall building are skyscrapers. New York was first called New Amsterdam.
There are 5 boroughs in New York. Their names are Queens, Manhattan,
Brooklyn, Staten Island and Bronx. France was offerd the Statue of Liberty
in 1886. Frederic Auguste Bartholdi and Gustave Eiffel were sculpted this.
The Statue of Liberty was an important symbol for immigrants in the 19th
century and early 20th century. It is on Liberty Island. The immigrants had
stop at Ellis Island before entering the United States. Wall Street is the
home of the New York Stock Exchange. The over name given to the World Trade
Center are the twin towers but they were destroyed by terrorists in
September 11th 2001. The term used to describe the site is Ground Zero. The
Hudson river separates New York City from the state of New Jersey. The
baseball is more popular. The 5th Avenue is considered one of the first
shopping streets in the world. To New York there are big monuments: the
Statue of Liberty, Empire State Building. These theatres: Shubert, Imperial
and museums: Guggenheim and the Met. There are 2 famous bridge: Verrazano
Bridge and Brooklyn Bridge. In Mahnattan there are lots of districts:
Little Italy,Chinatown,Harlem...
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1. Réponse todk
alors des fautes ou améliorations :
1) the over name ? je n'ai jamais entendu ça mais peut être que ça éxiste
2) tall buildingS pluriel
3) is skyscraper, au singulier, ça va avec the name
4) France offered, pas was ça inverse le sens
5) in the 19th century.
6)had TO stop ON
7) encore une fois, the name IS pas are, apprend à conjuguer le verbe être au présent !
8) ON september 11th
9) Baseball is (pas the baseball)
10) the most popular sport , si c'est ça que tu veux dire parce "le baseball est le plus populaire" ça veut rien dire, réfléchis un peu!
11) one of the BIGGEST par exemple mais one of the first veut pas dire grand chose
12) IN new York